Burning, skating across my
icy uncharted skin sheathing spasming muscles
The steam rising and engulfing
creating an asphyxiated yet euphoric sauna between us
With blindfolded ecstasy I yearn to stay in this foggy hazy body-shaking stupified lovely limbo
wow- great work, Warblingwave. i read this for the first time last night before going asleep, and i was taken aback by the level of pure, raw emotion you were able to communicate (and transmit to the reader) in such a short piece. one of many aspects of this poem that i found interesting was the choice of title. i have my own ideas for how to apply this title to the poem (based on my own experiences and interpretation) but im curious-- what was your reasoning? if you don't want to give a backstory, what emotions did you want to transfer to the reader by titling your piece so?